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The First Impression: How to Get Your Novel Noticed with Stronger First Pages

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The First Impression: How to Get Your Novel Noticed with Stronger First PagesYOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF: Your are a writer who struggles with beginning your novels You are a writer who ais unsure about how to improve your opening pages You are a writer who wants to strengthen your opening pages Your are a writer with strong ideas, who needs help implementing them ABOUT THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR: The first impression is sometimes your only impression. Before an agent can fall in love with your project as a whole, they

YOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF:

  • Your are a writer who struggles with beginning your novels
  • You are a writer who ais unsure about how to improve your opening pages
  • You are a writer who wants to strengthen your opening pages
  • Your are a writer with strong ideas, who needs help implementing them

ABOUT THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR:

The first impression is sometimes your only impression.

Before an agent can fall in love with your project as a whole, they must first fall in love with your submission. Strong opening pages are essential to getting your submission noticed and read by an agent. If an agent isn't hooked by those first few pages, it's unlikely that they'll want to read more. So what makes some submissions successful, while others receive form rejections and never manage to make it out of the slush pile? What prevents agents from wanting to read beyond the first chapter? The first page? The first paragraph? The first sentence?

In this on-demand webinar, instructor and literary agent Annie Hwang (Folio Literary Management) teaches you how to make the first few pages of your manuscript shine. You learn how to craft opening pages that can capture and sustain readers' attention and compel them to keep turning the page. You gain insights as to how agents go through their slush pile and what they look for in the projects they want to pursue. By the end of the presentation, you know how to establish characters readers will care about, how to set the right pace for your story from the very beginning, and how to avoid common pitfalls that can get in the way of your literary ambitions.

WHAT YOU'LL LEARN:

  • What agents look for in the first few pages and why
  • How to present the best first pages of your manuscript to compel an agent to request to see more and continue the conversation
  • How to pique interest and sustain that interest beyond the first line
  • The appropriate length and tone of a first chapter
  • How to decide whether your novel begins in the right place
  • How to set a strong foundation for the rest of your story
  • The importance of showcasing your unique authorial voice
  • Common pitfalls that can bore, tire, irritate, or completely put off readers

INSTRUCTOR:

Originally from Los Angeles, Annie Hwang first worked in journalism before moving to New York to pursue her love of books. Since joining Folio Literary Management she has had the pleasure of working with both debut and seasoned authors alike. Annie specializes in all categories of literary, upmarket, book club, and speculative fiction. She particularly enjoys working on historical novels and psychological thrillers. More than anything, Annie loves working with debut authors who have a gift for storytelling and can immerse her deep within a well-built world in the space of a few sentences. She is especially drawn to braided narratives, layered plots, and characters with deep emotional resonance. Annie also works on nonfiction in the categories of pop science, diet/health/fitness, food, lifestyle, humor, pop culture, and select narrative nonfiction.

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I purchased the owl ball because of other dog chew toys I purchased from Amazon. Those other chew toys are still holding together. The main reason I got the owl ball is due to the different noises it makes other than the regular squeak noise. After giving the toy to my dog he loved it right away. He especially liked the noise it made. After a few hours, I noticed he was chewing a white tube-like device. I took this away from him and determined it was the noise maker in the owl ball. I examined the owl ball and noticed the glue used to keep the ball cap shut did not hold. On closer inspection, I noticed what looked like rubber cement was used to hold the cap on but if it was rubber cement it was used improperly. Anyway, I just reglued the cap correctly and now it's just a ball because my dog destroyed the noise maker. OK, Since I posted this review I was contacted by the seller. They offered to give me a full refund for the owl ball. I accepted the offer. So, I will try it again, but buy a different color owl this time. I never expected a refund since it's just a ball now, my dog still plays with it and it is holding up very well. The material it is made from is pretty sturdy.
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Squeaker not working!
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I'll give it 3 stars because I love the design and it's sturdy and great for dogs to hold/launch. That said, the squeaker doesn't really work... I tried everything but it just doesn't make any sound. My dog wasn't really interested but when it did make a slight sound he approached it. Once it stopped he lost interest. But he's very difficult to please😆 so if you have a normal dog, he'll probably like it! I hope the manufacturer fixes the squeaker issue because apparently many people are having the same issue, which is a shame because the product is clearly well made! I'm on the fence about returning it just because the quality it's amazing(squeaker issue aside)!
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